AADSAS: Can somebody help me with grammar and wording?

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Jongho Yoon

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It's not my personal statement, but I wanted some natives to look at what I wrote on my AADSAS application, such as background section where I discuss my past experiences relating to dentistry.

English is my second language, and I feel like some of the wordings I used are little awkward but do not really know how to improve it. If you are willing to take a look at it, please leave a post. I will be able to compile all the sentences I wrote on my application and sent the document to you.
 
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