Use essay edge. They took my essay and did magic with it. Made my ideas sound on paper like they do in my own head. An incredibly hard thing to do in my opinon. I used Rose Metro. and i got the minimum service since i knew what i wanted to say and had a draft that could have been a mediocre final one. So i wast sarting from scratch or anything. I would advise against taking ANY content ideas from them. Their words expressing YOUR ideas is the only way. If not the interviewer is going to get a muddled image of you when you actually speak.