Any admitted students/adcom willing to lend some perspective and critique on my personal statement?

[RipSpamilton]

After what seemed like 10 revisions, I think I did it. I think I came to the final draft of my PS. Can someone take a look?

 

[GreenDuck12]

Sure, I can take a look. Copy and paste the essay in a message and I'll go through it today.

 

[RipSpamilton]

Sure, I can take a look. Copy and paste the essay in a message and I'll go through it today.

Thanks! PMing you now.

 

[Rachapkis]

You can send it to me too, if you want.

 

[RipSpamilton]

You can send it to me too, if you want.

Any input helps, thanks! I'll copy and paste it in a PM.