Anyone good at Grammar want to rip something apart?

[steelersfan1243]

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A.k.a my personal statement? Today is the day! I just want to make sure I did not overlook any simple errors. Any help would be appreciated, please and thank you

 

[emraldragon]

There's a thread for that.

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/thr...ment-guide-and-reader-list-2015-2016.1125995/


Good luck on your application!

 

[steelersfan1243]

There's a thread for that.

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/thr...ment-guide-and-reader-list-2015-2016.1125995/


Good luck on your application!

Sorry, I think that thread is a bit inactive though! I messaged all the available ones a while back and got no response unfortunately. (except for alum, thanks for the help again, but I had to change the personal statement since then)

 

[emraldragon]

I apologize. I didn't read the thread to make sure anyone was available.

Sorry, I think that thread is a bit inactive though! I messaged all the available ones a while back and got no response unfortunately. (except for alum, thanks for the help again, but I had to change the personal statement since then)

 

[docwannabe1008]

pm me

 

[steelersfan1243]

bump, any opinion will help!

 

[Doudline]

Sure. I will be your grammar nazi.

(Despite being only a foreigner, I like to think of myself as a refined foreigner. 😉)

 

[TraumaLlamaMD]

Tip one: "grammar" isn't a proper noun, please don't capitalize it.