I tried this service. I was very surprised that that I got feedback from Dr. Duello within one day. She did not do gramma or sentence correction. Instead she gave me some general advice.
She thought my personal statement should have something to let me stand out and convince the Adcoms why they should admit me. However, I just wrote a lot about my volunteer experience and answered the question why I am interested in medicine,, but not the question why me. I still did not know whether I need to change my personal statement since I feel that my qualifications are shown in other sections of the application. I use the personal statement to show why I am interested in medicine and my passion for caring for patients.
Any suggestions or opinions?
Thanks!