Anyone want to take a shot at editing an essay?

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life4cause

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I have been working on this essay for the past two weeks!!! Considering that this is only one of the essays on a single application, I think this is crazy. So I decided to come here for help.

The essay question is: What satisfactions do you expect to receive from your activities as a physician?* Enter your response in essay format. LIMIT WRITING TO 2484 CHARACTERS.

When I first saw it, it seemed like a straight forward question, nothing special and definitely something that I should feel comfortable talking about. But it's not, for some reason. I either have a writer's block and just can't think or I can't fully elaborate on it. I mean somethings you can't put in words, you just feel them. Anyway, so far this has been my best attempt, but I feel like it's crap. The feeling are really genuine. I really mean everything that I am saying in the essay, I'm just not sure if this is the best way to say what I am trying to say.

So anyone bored with the apps, just waiting to hear back, or just want to help out? Please PM me if you can help and I will send it to you.
 
If you still want feedback, just PM me. Actually, I suppose I should PM you in case you don't check your thread very often.

- tinkerbelle
 
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