Can anyone read my PS???

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I want to submit soon but im so freaking nervous about my PS. Can anyone read it and provide me some feedback please?
I will; But I wont be able to return it before Monday night. If you are in a hurry, may be someone else can help out.
 
Is there anyone else who could look it over once? I have emailed some people on the PS reader list but they have not responded. I am really trying to submit by end of June.

Thanks so much, i love SDN lol
 
I can also take a look if you still need someone.
 
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