can someone please quickly edit this activity description?

[CamdenStick]

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I assisted nurses escort, feed, and comfort patients; take vital signs of patients; connect patients to electrocardiograms; deliver patient specimens and lab results to different departments. Also, I witnessed physicians working together to treat patients in many critical situations.


also, is this sufficient or do i need to write more?

 

[prionsRbad]

I assisted nurses escort, feed, and comfort patients; take vital signs of patients; connect patients to electrocardiograms; deliver patient specimens and lab results to different departments. Also, I witnessed physicians working together to treat patients in many critical situations.


also, is this sufficient or do i need to write more?

I would say "Volunteer in the ________ department at _______ hospital. My duties included transporting patients, practicing patient advocacy, taking vitals, and delivering lab specimens.

The rest is either insignifigant or obvious (like observing doctors and other hospital staff). Just my opinion, though! 😀

Good luck

 

[CamdenStick]

thank u.. anymore suggestions?

 

[doinmybest5840]

I assisted nurses escort, feed, and comfort patients; take vital signs of patients; connect patients to electrocardiograms; deliver patient specimens and lab results to different departments. Also, I witnessed physicians working together to treat patients in many critical situations.


also, is this sufficient or do i need to write more?

What activity is this for?

My edits:

I assisted nurses by escorting, feeding, and comforting patients; taking vital signs of patients; connecting patients to electrocardiograms; and delivering patient specimens and lab results to different departments. Also, I witnessed physicians working together to treat patients in many critical situations.

I would also give an example of a critical situation if you have a simple one that can be explained in a sentence or less.

This is just my opinion, though.