Challenge essay topic - ED

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To preface, I know that most people recommend staying away from talking about eating disorders for challenge essays (which I have) but now I have one secondary prompt that is asking for our "greatest challenge" - it reads:

"The Admissions Committee is interested in gaining more insight into you as a person. Please describe a significant personal challenge you have faced, one which you feel has helped to shape you as a person. Examples may include a moral or ethical dilemma, a situation of personal adversity, or a hurdle in your life that you worked hard to overcome. Please include how you got through the experience, how you handled the uncertainty or stress, and what you learned about yourself as a result."

This prompt feels like it is asking for something deeper than the smaller challenges I've used for past essays (navigating the U.S. education system on my own bc of foreign parents, interpersonal/workplace challenges, etc) and if I'm being honest, my eating disorder IS one of the biggest things that "helped shape me as a person". It was mainly at the beginning of high school so I would present it as a long time ago and I would also present it just as an unhealthy relationship with food. I developed a passion for fitness/health/nutrition since then and it's been a huge part of why I've done the things I've done, like working at gyms, becoming a ski patroller, getting into hiking/backpacking, etc. This healthy relationship I have with food and exercise now is largely what I used to handle stress in college and is my biggest outlet now. If I paint it as something from a long time ago and talk about all of these positives, do you think it would be okay?

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"The Admissions Committee is interested in gaining more insight into you as a person. Please describe a significant personal challenge you have faced, one which you feel has helped to shape you as a person. Examples may include a moral or ethical dilemma, a situation of personal adversity, or a hurdle in your life that you worked hard to overcome. Please include how you got through the experience, how you handled the uncertainty or stress, and what you learned about yourself as a result."

This prompt feels like it is asking for something deeper than the smaller challenges I've used for past essays (navigating the U.S. education system on my own bc of foreign parents, interpersonal/workplace challenges, etc) and if I'm being honest, my eating disorder IS one of the biggest things that "helped shape me as a person". It was mainly at the beginning of high school so I would present it as a long time ago and I would also present it just as an unhealthy relationship with food. I developed a passion for fitness/health/nutrition since then and it's been a huge part of why I've done the things I've done, like working at gyms, becoming a ski patroller, getting into hiking/backpacking, etc. This healthy relationship I have with food and exercise now is largely what I used to handle stress in college and is my biggest outlet now. If I paint it as something from a long time ago and talk about all of these positives, do you think it would be okay?
My thoughts:
  1. The prompt is asking for a significant challenge and not necessarily your greatest challenge. Acclimating to a new country would adequately address this prompt (in my opinion).
  2. If you do not mention your eating disorder, do you feel that your application would not accurately represent who you are? If so, are you okay with potentially being consciously or subconsciously discriminated against by some adcom members? We are all human and come with our own biases. The answer to these two questions will guide how you should proceed.
  3. If you do talk about your eating disorder, I would recommend minimizing the severity of your symptoms. Whether you overcame a mild-moderate eating disorder vs a severe-fulminant eating disorder (for example, one that required hospitalization and an academic LOA) will not affect the impact of your application, but will certainly affect one's perception of your overall "risk".
  4. Keep in mind that medical school is a furnace that can break even healthy students, so make sure your eating disorder is truly under control. As a medical student, have a low threshold to proactively seek out help at the first sight of trouble.
As an aside, I initially thought your essay was about erectile dysfunction :laugh:.
 
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