Choosing Diversity Essay Topic

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catie_jane

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I know there have been many "diversity" topic threads floating out there, but I was hoping I could get some advice. I have a few topics that I could potentially talk about but I am not sure what ones are the most "appropriate" in addressing this prompt.

So I'll briefly list a few of the topics I could potentially write about:

1. Grew up in one of the largest heroin capitals in the nation and when I was little managed to get "stuck" with a used needle while playing outside. Went through all of the HIV/AIDS protocol, HepC, etc. (clean bill of health by the way). My mom chose not to sue the city because then my name would be released and she didn't want me being known as the "crack baby" (her words not mine). When I was old enough I helped my mom work with town officials to get a needle exchange program started in our town in hopes that users would bring their needles to these places and exchange them for cleans ones instead of them being strew across the city.

2. At the beginning of high school I tried out for and was chosen to play on an international baseball team (1st girl in their history). We played during the summer for about a month in Poland and Netherlands.

3. In high school I convinced the school to let me join the boys swimming/diving team so that I could play field hockey in the fall (when the girls swimming season was) and being able to still swim/dive. I was able to dive for 3 years on the boys team and won a bunch of schools and conference titles.

4. 1st-6th grade I went to a really small Catholic school (8 kids per class) but then in 7th grade transferred to the public school system because they offered advanced classes that my Catholic school didn't. Was technically the minority in school (75-80% hispanic population), so it was definitely a different environment to be in (had to get used to the daycare center being next to my history class). In the end I am really happy I switched schools because I made a lot of good friends and think I came out a more well-rounded person because of the experience.

These are all before I went to undergrad obviously, but I ended up going to a undergrad institution that was completely opposite from what I had grown up with (a lot of middle-upper class, caucasian students who mostly all went to private high schools). Although, ironically, the town bordering us is actually very similar to my hometown (go figure right?).

I'm not sure which one of these is the most appropriate to write about for the diversity essay (or any of them at all). Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
 
1 sounds really interesting. It was from a while back but it shows that you don't just complain about problems/injustices you actually go out and fix them. Also it focuses on a social/medical issue. I would write more about how the experience demonstrates who you are rather than the experience itself


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I think all of these are really good, but I love that #1 has such a personal connection. Definitely write about what you learned from setting up the needle exchange program, any beliefs about drug users that previously you had and then maybe changed later, etc. I think this is a great topic, and if I were an adcom, I would be excited to read it!
 
@beeboops @You're My Boy Blue

you guys don't think it would be an issue that it happened so long ago? I wasn't sure if we were supposed to focus more on highschool/undergrad related experiences
 
I would bet that if I took a random sample of 9 medical students, I'd be unlikely to find one who grew up in an area where heroin was widely available and dirty needles were an everyday hazard to kids. So, I'd go with that.

Diversity can be what you know, the esoteric knowledge that is not common knowledge. When you acquired that knowledge is not important. If you lived up through 8th grade in a Puerto Rican neighborhood and was the only non-Puerto Rican in your grade school, that would be a legit "diversity" topic even the experience ended before HS.
 
@beeboops @You're My Boy Blue

you guys don't think it would be an issue that it happened so long ago? I wasn't sure if we were supposed to focus more on highschool/undergrad related experiences

Seconded, I have a coolish unique thing but it seems so long ago...
 
Activities/ECs should be after high school but diversity is a different story. This is a defining moment in your life. It should be shared. Again don't focus on the experience (don't make it sound like the experiences section of AMCAS) focus on yourself. What you can bring to the table. Who you are. Also as @LizzyM stated it really is unique.




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@beeboops @You're My Boy Blue

you guys don't think it would be an issue that it happened so long ago? I wasn't sure if we were supposed to focus more on highschool/undergrad related experiences

I don't think so. The knowledge that you gain from the experience is with you for your entire life.
 
Thank you everyone for your input!

@LizzyM when addressing prompts like this, in the end do you have to bring it back and relate it to medicine? Or will committees just assume that what you have learned from this experience will add to your diversity as a physician?
 
Thank you everyone for your input!

@LizzyM when addressing prompts like this, in the end do you have to bring it back and relate it to medicine? Or will committees just assume that what you have learned from this experience will add to your diversity as a physician?

My plan was to throw it back with how it aligns with a school's mission statement (if possible).
 
Surely something interesting or cool about you has developed during college? I shy away from things people as kids.

I know there have been many "diversity" topic threads floating out there, but I was hoping I could get some advice. I have a few topics that I could potentially talk about but I am not sure what ones are the most "appropriate" in addressing this prompt.

So I'll briefly list a few of the topics I could potentially write about:

1. Grew up in one of the largest heroin capitals in the nation and when I was little managed to get "stuck" with a used needle while playing outside. Went through all of the HIV/AIDS protocol, HepC, etc. (clean bill of health by the way). My mom chose not to sue the city because then my name would be released and she didn't want me being known as the "crack baby" (her words not mine). When I was old enough I helped my mom work with town officials to get a needle exchange program started in our town in hopes that users would bring their needles to these places and exchange them for cleans ones instead of them being strew across the city.

2. At the beginning of high school I tried out for and was chosen to play on an international baseball team (1st girl in their history). We played during the summer for about a month in Poland and Netherlands.

3. In high school I convinced the school to let me join the boys swimming/diving team so that I could play field hockey in the fall (when the girls swimming season was) and being able to still swim/dive. I was able to dive for 3 years on the boys team and won a bunch of schools and conference titles.

4. 1st-6th grade I went to a really small Catholic school (8 kids per class) but then in 7th grade transferred to the public school system because they offered advanced classes that my Catholic school didn't. Was technically the minority in school (75-80% hispanic population), so it was definitely a different environment to be in (had to get used to the daycare center being next to my history class). In the end I am really happy I switched schools because I made a lot of good friends and think I came out a more well-rounded person because of the experience.

These are all before I went to undergrad obviously, but I ended up going to a undergrad institution that was completely opposite from what I had grown up with (a lot of middle-upper class, caucasian students who mostly all went to private high schools). Although, ironically, the town bordering us is actually very similar to my hometown (go figure right?).

I'm not sure which one of these is the most appropriate to write about for the diversity essay (or any of them at all). Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
 
@catie_jane or you could talk about looking so similar to keira knightley and all the free stuff/favors/opportunities that's directly or indirectly led to over the years.


I jest, of course.
 
Surely something interesting or cool about you has developed during college? I shy away from things people as kids.

I did an apprenticeship in a skilled trade during college, but that's already in my primary. Repetition is looked down upon as well, no?
 
Surely something interesting or cool about you has developed during college? I shy away from things people as kids.

Pretty much followed a similar path in college but didn't necessarily have the time to do as much "cool" stuff as I did before college.

The only thing that comes to mind is I became an active part of my "new" community when I came to college. For instance, there was a big movement in my town to restrict/stop the development of an affordable housing complex being built in the community. The community is composed of a lot of middle to upper class people and they believe that building affordable housing would attract "the wrong crowd of people". My mom had to rely on government assistant for a short time when we were little and my hometown consists of primarily 75% affordable housing and I don't consider myself or the people I grew up with "the wrong crowd of people" (struck a personal nerve with me).

I didn't have as much as an "active" role as I did with the needle exchange program but I did go to town meetings/discussions/forums regarding the development.
 
Flesh it out for the secondary. OR, ask your three best friends what's cool about you?

I did an apprenticeship in a skilled trade during college, but that's already in my primary. Repetition is looked down upon as well, no?


An advocate! I LIKE it! Run with this.
The only thing that comes to mind is I became an active part of my "new" community when I came to college. For instance, there was a big movement in my town to restrict/stop the development of an affordable housing complex being built in the community. The community is composed of a lot of middle to upper class people and they believe that building affordable housing would attract "the wrong crowd of people". My mom had to rely on government assistant for a short time when we were little and my hometown consists of primarily 75% affordable housing and I don't consider myself or the people I grew up with "the wrong crowd of people" (struck a personal nerve with me).

I didn't have as much as an "active" role as I did with the needle exchange program but I did go to town meetings/discussions/forums regarding the development.
 
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Flesh it out for the secondary. OR, ask your three best friends what's cool about you?

So I did, I got 3 solid but wildly different answers, I'll just write all three and go with the best one or throw them separately at schools they'd resonate with better to see what sticks.
 
Pretty much followed a similar path in college but didn't necessarily have the time to do as much "cool" stuff as I did before college.

The only thing that comes to mind is I became an active part of my "new" community when I came to college. For instance, there was a big movement in my town to restrict/stop the development of an affordable housing complex being built in the community. The community is composed of a lot of middle to upper class people and they believe that building affordable housing would attract "the wrong crowd of people". My mom had to rely on government assistant for a short time when we were little and my hometown consists of primarily 75% affordable housing and I don't consider myself or the people I grew up with "the wrong crowd of people" (struck a personal nerve with me).

I didn't have as much as an "active" role as I did with the needle exchange program but I did go to town meetings/discussions/forums regarding the development.
lol sounds like the 6
http://www.thestar.com/news/gta/2015/05/25/midtowners-battle-the-rise-of-the-midrise.html
the horrors of affordable housing
 
Would love some input from anyone, but especially @Goro on my idea for the diversity essay:

Many of my friends suffered from depression and anxiety during high school, and so I went into college wanting to advocate good mental health. Since freshman year, I've been a big advocate of mental health on campus through a non-profit that I've closely worked with. During my junior year, I wanted to do a little more about it and so my friend and I started a student publication advocating mental health.

Do you think that this is appropriate for a diversity essay? I mention the student publication in my EC's but don't really talk about what it means to me. Just talked about what it was.
 
I think you can do better. Everyone is in favor of good health, mental or physical.



Would love some input from anyone, but especially @Goro on my idea for the diversity essay:

Many of my friends suffered from depression and anxiety during high school, and so I went into college wanting to advocate good mental health. Since freshman year, I've been a big advocate of mental health on campus through a non-profit that I've closely worked with. During my junior year, I wanted to do a little more about it and so my friend and I started a student publication advocating mental health.

Do you think that this is appropriate for a diversity essay? I mention the student publication in my EC's but don't really talk about what it means to me. Just talked about what it was.