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The Mentor Forum (linked through my signature) has Writing Mentors available to help you. Please be advised that there is a (rough) 100 word limit on writing critiques. This is longer than you think. If you have something you can't figure out how to phrase or something you really want to emphasize, our mentors can help you find a way to do it.
Here's an example of a 100-word passage (actually 92 words):
Few things in life are as rewarding and fulfilling as owning a pet. Whether it's a dog, cat, bird, or fish, the appeal is the same—years of fun and unconditional love. Indeed, pets can actually satisfy many of the things people crave most: companionship, communication, loyalty, and plenty of amusement. Perhaps that's why pets are so popular among the elderly and people who live alone. As human relationships grow more complex with each new technological gadget, the simple bond between a pet and its owner offers a refreshing and comforting reprieve.
As you see, that's a substantial paragraph you could get assistance with. Come and visit us!
Here's an example of a 100-word passage (actually 92 words):
Few things in life are as rewarding and fulfilling as owning a pet. Whether it's a dog, cat, bird, or fish, the appeal is the same—years of fun and unconditional love. Indeed, pets can actually satisfy many of the things people crave most: companionship, communication, loyalty, and plenty of amusement. Perhaps that's why pets are so popular among the elderly and people who live alone. As human relationships grow more complex with each new technological gadget, the simple bond between a pet and its owner offers a refreshing and comforting reprieve.
As you see, that's a substantial paragraph you could get assistance with. Come and visit us!
