Feedback Needed for Essays

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PureWater

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This is my first post here.
Yeah, I know I should have done this much earlier.

I've applied to MSTP and failed with flying colors: one interview.

I'm reapplying right now, and one of the few places I can look for improvement is the essays. Since GPA of 3.54 and MCAT of 32 is set and impossible to change much for me and because of essay feedback I got from the schools, I'm focusing on my essays now. I got the research part and am continuing it.

Would anyone be kind enough as to read my 3 essays and give strength/weakness feedback on them?
Thank you in advance.
 
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