Help me pick between 2 PS drafts!

[oregonian19]

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Hello everyone,

I have completed two drafts of my personal statement which are entirely different aside from the introduction.

I would love and appreciate anyone to read them and just tell me which one they prefer. I will send a Google Doc with both of the statements in it!

Thank you!

 

[oregonian19]

Bump.

I have had four people read and it’s tied at 2-2!