Help with Personal Statement

[caremkn]

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Hi there,

I am currently working on my personal statement, so I'm just wondering if anyone of you can proofread my essay and give me some feed backs 🙂

Thank you in advance

 

[MrBeans]

Take your statement to a writing department at your school, and have your parents and friends look it over.

 

[aclementine]

be careful sending ur PS to ppl who have not applied yet... you don't want to have other plagiarize YOU... be very vigilant.

 

[alanan84]

be careful sending ur PS to ppl who have not applied yet... you don't want to have other plagiarize YOU... be very vigilant.

I agree, I would take it to an english major friend or your school's english department before I pm'd it to some random person on SDN. Just my advice.

 

[MrBeans]

Good point guys... 👍

 

[Matt2010]

Very true, you should be very selective about who you allow to read it. There are, however, a few people on SDN that were very helpful when I was writing mine. But honestly, I had professors, fellow students, English professors and really just anybody I could find proofread my PS. That is where I received the majority of my feedback from.

 

[doc toothache]

Very true, you should be very selective about who you allow to read it. There are, however, a few people on SDN that were very helpful when I was writing mine. But honestly, I had professors, fellow students, English professors and really just anybody I could find proofread my PS. That is where I received the majority of my feedback from.

Good advice.

 

[StirrinIt]

Very true, you should be very selective about who you allow to read it. There are, however, a few people on SDN that were very helpful when I was writing mine. But honestly, I had professors, fellow students, English professors and really just anybody I could find proofread my PS. That is where I received the majority of my feedback from.

haha really??! i had my bf and my mother...