Hello,
“I hope your day is going well. My name is hiraeth9 and I am currently accepted at School B. Unfortuently, when choosing schools I am constricted significantly by scholarships and financial aid opportunities. I’ve also been accepted to School A with an X amount of financial aid in scholarships. However, I would much rather attend School B because of X, Y, and Z reasons. Having said that, I was wondering if there are any additional scholarship opportunities at School B that I may apply to or be considered for?
Enjoy the rest of your day”
Sincerely,
Hiraeth9