How to include moving countries into personal statement?

[leylahjade]

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Help me please!

I moved from England to America during 8th grade and I think this would be a good point to tie into my personal statement but I honestly don't know to incorporate it. I don't want it to sound too cliche, I want to make it have a point and in that way I don't know what points to discuss so it doesn't sound boring.

I'm not the best writer so I am having trouble tying things together right now so I think that may be the problem.

Any advice would be greatly appreciated!

 

[kcha90]

Help me please!

I moved from England to America during 8th grade and I think this would be a good point to tie into my personal statement but I honestly don't know to incorporate it. I don't want it to sound too cliche, I want to make it have a point and in that way I don't know what points to discuss so it doesn't sound boring.

I'm not the best writer so I am having trouble tying things together right now so I think that may be the problem.

Any advice would be greatly appreciated!

The first thing you should figure out is how it affected you. You are asking how to incorporate it but you give no context. There's no point in including it if it didn't affect you in some tangible way. How has it contributed to your identity or the way you view the world?