How to strengthen my application (Rising Junior applying next cycle)

[princeofallsaiyans1]

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Advice Received.

 

[Mr.Smile12]

What's your Bonner commitment/community organization? What are you doing? The issue I have is your apparent lack of service orientation activities, and tutoring in schools doesn't fill this bucket.

 

[princeofallsaiyans1]

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[Mr.Smile12]

Yes, more food bank hours will help. Fundraising doesn't help you.

 

[princeofallsaiyans1]

Yes, more food bank hours will help. Fundraising doesn't help you.

Sounds good, thank you for your advice, it's deeply appreciated.

Do you have any other issues/concerns, or areas I can attempt to strengthen?