How to strengthen my application (Rising Junior applying next cycle)

[saiyan.uzumaki17]

Advice Received.

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[Mr.Smile12]

What's your Bonner commitment/community organization? What are you doing? The issue I have is your apparent lack of service orientation activities, and tutoring in schools doesn't fill this bucket.

 

[saiyan.uzumaki17]

What's your Bonner commitment/community organization? What are you doing? The issue I have is your apparent lack of service orientation activities, and tutoring in schools doesn't fill this bucket.

It's with the free clinic, where I do things like take patients' vitals, urinalysis, update charts, prep exam rooms, conduct blood tests, etc... My non-clinical responsibilities at the same clinic: involve things like reaching out to patients about appointments, tele-interpreting for Arabic-speaking patients, creating cultural-competency guides, etc. I've also been involved in fundraising for humanitarian relief, however not sure if that's adequate.


Would you recommend serving more at the Food Bank then?

 

[Mr.Smile12]

Yes, more food bank hours will help. Fundraising doesn't help you.

 

[saiyan.uzumaki17]

Yes, more food bank hours will help. Fundraising doesn't help you.

Sounds good, thank you for your advice, it's deeply appreciated.

Do you have any other issues/concerns, or areas I can attempt to strengthen?