I have been accepted, I need to write a letter to hold my spot, what do I say?

[MiaFLSurf]

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Hey guys....Im confused about sending a letter to reserve my spot at a school I have been accepted to. THey do NOT require a deposit, but require a letter sent to them in writing to reserve my place for now.

Question is, what do I say. This is what I came up with:

To Whom It May Concern:

Thank you very much for accepting me into the ------------------------- Class of 2009. I enthusiastically accept the position offered to me on November --, 2004 and would like it reserved. Please let me know if I need to do anything else required for holding my spot for the Class of 2009. I am thrilled at this opportunity and look forward to entering next Fall.

Thank you again,


(Name)

Is this ok? I said Im thrilled to enter next fall, but I might no go there, should I take that line out?

 

[runner1979]

Congratulations on your acceptance!

Your letter is fine, but I'd definately take out the thrilled statement and scrap the "Thank you again,". Sincerely, will do just fine.

 

[51487]

Because you've already been accepted it doesn't really matter all that much what you say to them unless it has cursing involved 😉 Seriously though, congrats and the letter looks great!
Sasha

 

[MiaFLSurf]

To Whom It May Concern:

Thank you very much for accepting me into the ----------------------------Class of 2009. I enthusiastically accept the position offered to me on November --, 2004 and would like it reserved. Please let me know if I need to do anything else required for holding my spot for the Class of 2009. I look forward to entering next Fall.

Sincerely,


Name

Done deal, thanks for the quick replies.

 

[Dr. Donkey]

Just be brief and respectful, like this:

To the Dean with the Googly Eye,

Thanks for the acceptance, losers 👎 . I really don't want to go to your crap-tastic school, but I'm going to go ahead and reserve a spot anyway in the very unlikely case that I don't get in ANYWHERE else and also because the admissions secretary was hot and I hooked up with my student host.

Love,
[insert name]


PS: I call dibs on the hot cadaver.

 

[USCTex]

Just be brief and respectful, like this:

To the Dean with the Googly Eye,

Thanks for the acceptance, losers 👎 . I really don't want to go to your crap-tastic school, but I'm going to go ahead and reserve a spot anyway in the very unlikely case that I don't get in ANYWHERE else and also because the admissions secretary was hot and I hooked up with my student host.

Love,
[insert name]


PS: I call dibs on the hot cadaver.

 

[SanDiegoSOD]

I don't think you need to write a super-enthusiastic or overly grateful letter. You're in already!

 

[flash]

Sounds fine...mine was basically the same...for U Miami? You definately going or still gonna see how things pan out with other schools? I'm almost certain I'm going to go UM.

 

[Fusion]

PS: I call dibs on the hot cadaver.

That's just wrong, dude.

 

[superso]

id say 'thanks'

 

[Fermata]

"I'm rich, biatch!"? 😀