Ingredients for the most impressive Personal Statements?

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Why were most impressive personal statement you've read impressive? If a personal statement has ever made you want an applicant to get accepted, why was that?
 
They were able to back up statements of character and intent with history/evidence. Everyone says they're dedicated to the underserved and blah blah, but the best statements can then point to something the applicant did, like working in a free clinic, or volunteering with the health dept, or whatever and say "see? told ya".
 
They all have a theme and compelling experiences to back it up.
 
Why were most impressive personal statement you've read impressive? If a personal statement has ever made you want an applicant to get accepted, why was that?

started a school in africa, cured aids, and is a URM from the most underserved comunity. Just do something like this
 
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