I think what I did in my situation, was I made an appointment with the writing center on campus. They're usually very good. I had them vet everything and I thanked them for their time.
I made the changes that I thought were good that they wanted to make and I kept in some things that were kind of odd but that's okay. Then I made another appointment with a different person. I let them check themselves and my paper at the same time. I made those changes.
Then I think I went for a third time and I made those changes. All the while, there were people blasting my stuff, things I changed, things I hadn't changed, and most importantly there were specialists that were blasting the other specialist for doing X y and z. of course, they didn't know that they were checking their co-workers' work.