Looking for Personal Statement help!

[goobears]

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I'm probably like 90% done with my personal statement, but I'm really not sure if I've taken the right route in writing it. If anybody is willing to give it a quick read and give some input I would really, really appreciate it.

It's the only thing holding me back from submitting!

PM me if you are able to help 🙂

 

[Electronegative]

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=683792


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[goobears]

Thanks, but I haven't been able to get a response from anyone from that thread.

 

[chman]

I'm not any kind of expert or applying this year, but I am an English tutor, so if you just want an opinion I would be happy to read it.

 

[familyaerospace]

Thanks, but I haven't been able to get a response from anyone from that thread.

Probably because they are all swamped.

 

[readdoc]

So my personal statement is done and i'm okay with it, but now I'm looking at your comments on why medicine and I cover the I always wanted to be a doctor thing and the i love science thing and I want to help people thing. But those are true for me. It may seem like everyone says the same thing, but isn't that the sort of person drawn to medicine?

 

[deleted325463]

So my personal statement is done and i'm okay with it, but now I'm looking at your comments on why medicine and I cover the I always wanted to be a doctor thing and the i love science thing and I want to help people thing. But those are true for me. It may seem like everyone says the same thing, but isn't that the sort of person drawn to medicine?

yeah. you're just supposed to say it in a way that is personal and unique.