Need help with personal statement

[J~ingle]

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Hi, I'm a premed student, so guess I shouldn't be here, but I would really appreciate it if you could help read my personal statement and offer some advice. You don't have to be specific as I will have others correct my grammar and the flow of it. Please let me know if you are kind enough and also have extra time to do this! Thanks a ton! BTW, I'm interested in becoming a surgeon!

 

[LunaOri]

If you send me the link to a Google doc or Word doc, I will read it.