personal assay--help!

[wsgwz]

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i am now applying for NEO school. i am working on assay now. the school ask me some question about the intension and characterics of optometrist. i have to submit them in these two days. i am wondering if somebody have a good personal assay, please send me a copy for a reference, i would be very appreciated. my email is [email protected]

thank you!

 

[butterfly413]

I think it's really important that you write your ESSAY completely on your own. I don't think you're going to find someone who will send you their essay as a reference sheet for you - the essay is personal, and only you can answer them for yourself. Just be honest and answer the questions provided by the schools.

If you need help, ask a friend or professor to proofread and give you some tips. Being professional is really important, so make sure to double-check your grammar and spelling!

 

[prettygreeneyes]

The admissions committee wants to get to know you... not someone from the Internet. Even if your intention was just to "get some ideas" - it still isn't the best idea. If you need specific help on grammar or spelling - find someone to read your essay. If you have no idea where to begin, talk to your college writing center.

 

[cunikki]

i think that you should get some help with the english language. if i were you i would write your own thoughts down and then get someone like an english teacher or basically anyone who writes/speaks english fluently to look over your work.