Personal statement advice

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Hello! I have recently written a rough draft of my personal statement and am wondering if anyone would be able to give advice about the overall content and if my theme is too cliche. I can worry about grammar later on but getting perspective on the theme would be very helpful, thanks!

 

[907914]

Hello! I have recently written a rough draft of my personal statement and am wondering if anyone would be able to give advice about the overall content and if my theme is too cliche. I can worry about grammar later on but getting perspective on the theme would be very helpful, thanks!

Gladly will help.

 

[lalalallala]

I'll help!

 

[star-lily]

Sure!