Personal Statement Critique help

[seunglim87]

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I need someone to help me with my personal statement. I am applying to both one year masters program and aadsas. so i wrote a personal statement for the masters program which doenst have character limit. it came out to be about 9000 words. i need to reduce it to 4500. Anyone who likes to read& fix essays wanna give it a try? to be honest, its more like a autobiography than a personal statement. is there anyone out there wanna get to know me and help me out LOL? send me PM. by the way i have 2.98 GPA and 23AA and 25TA. doesnt it sound interesting?

 

[peanutb123]

take it to your career center & writing center at your univ. These are professional even though they might seem of sometimes they know what they are doing b/c they do it all the time.

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[UBERlowGPA]

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