Personal Statement critique?

[promethion]

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Hello everyone!

I just wrapped up my Biomedical Sciences, M.S. year-long program (with a 3.92 GPA over 39 credits 🙂) and I'm looking forward to applying this cycle!!! Woooo!

Would anyone be willing to look over my personal statement? It's been read over by a few professors from my program, but due to my lackluster undergrad GPA, I'm banking on having the rest of my application look as great as possible and I figured a few extra readers would help with that. Please let me know and I can PM you my personal statement!

 

[845302]

Yes! Send it over! Just make sure I'm not the only one making suggestions because 2+>1 😉

-Fyz

 

[amariesa]

Yeah, I can look over another statement. Im pretty good with flow and paragraph structure.