Personal Statement Debate

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I guess it depends on who said that and what they meant by it. This is how I interpret your directive:

On one hand, for a med school app, you probably don't want to get on a soap box and go over anything that is controversial. I think the consensus is, for the most part, keep away from things that could potentially cause anyone to disagree with your point of view. If you feel like you have to cover something controversial, ride that fence, but err on the side of bleeding heart. In that sense, try not to make a statement. If someone on adcom disagrees with you, you're not making it easy on yourself. For the most part, pre-med and early med students don't have the information they need to really make a real statement.

I feel like the way to go on med school applications is to simply "tell your story." It was obviously very personal, but I really don't feel like I made a statement. I just tried to say why I wanted to pursue medicine, why I was different than everyone else, why I would be a good choice, and how I knew it would fit me (experiences). Not that what I did was necessarily correct, but I got good feedback from my proofreaders and got accepted.

I guess it all depends on your definition of "statement." My definition is declaring where your beliefs are on an issue. I think it's a bad idea (at least on the AMCAS personal statement) going into med school.

As for your second question: maybe. At this point (interviewing for residencies) in a career, you should have a much better idea of what is important to you and what you want to accomplish. Residencies are also interviewing you to see if you would be a good match for their programs. A show of confidence would probably be better received in this situation that is largely based on competency, and a researched, tailored statement could also align your goals as a physician to a hospital's goals for healthcare. I've not had this experience yet and could be way off base, but that's my take on it.

Interesting questions.
 
I guess it depends on who said that and what they meant by it. This is how I interpret your directive:

On one hand, for a med school app, you probably don't want to get on a soap box and go over anything that is controversial. I think the consensus is, for the most part, keep away from things that could potentially cause anyone to disagree with your point of view. If you feel like you have to cover something controversial, ride that fence, but err on the side of bleeding heart. In that sense, try not to make a statement. If someone on adcom disagrees with you, you're not making it easy on yourself. For the most part, pre-med and early med students don't have the information they need to really make a real statement.

I feel like the way to go on med school applications is to simply "tell your story." It was obviously very personal, but I really don't feel like I made a statement. I just tried to say why I wanted to pursue medicine, why I was different than everyone else, why I would be a good choice, and how I knew it would fit me (experiences). Not that what I did was necessarily correct, but I got good feedback from my proofreaders and got accepted.

I guess it all depends on your definition of "statement." My definition is declaring where your beliefs are on an issue. I think it's a bad idea (at least on the AMCAS personal statement) going into med school.

As for your second question: maybe. At this point (interviewing for residencies) in a career, you should have a much better idea of what is important to you and what you want to accomplish. Residencies are also interviewing you to see if you would be a good match for their programs. A show of confidence would probably be better received in this situation that is largely based on competency, and a researched, tailored statement could also align your goals as a physician to a hospital's goals for healthcare. I've not had this experience yet and could be way off base, but that's my take on it.

Interesting questions.

Agree with all of this. Your personal statement has to be personal--how will you stand out among the thousands of qualified applicants otherwise? Just be a human. That's a good start.
 
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Yeah but don't make it a sob story. Avoid cliche reasons of why medicine interested you like "my grandma had surgery and it changed my life blah blah blah."

You gotta back up your reasons of becoming a DO with solid clinical experiences such as shadowing, volunteering, research, etc. let your actions and experiences speak and show evidence.
 
Yeah but don't make it a sob story. Avoid cliche reasons of why medicine interested you like "my grandma had surgery and it changed my life blah blah blah."

You gotta back up your reasons of becoming a DO with solid clinical experiences such as shadowing, volunteering, research, etc. let your actions and experiences speak and show evidence.
Mine was the world's biggest sob story (like seriously the entire first half is just different people dying). I think it's ok as long as you are legitimately sincere about it and it comes across as such.
 
You need to avoid both extremes when writing a personal statement. It shouldn't be so personal it is unprofessional, but at the same time it should speak to your unique experiences. Similarly, you shouldn't take any controversial stances that could antagonize the reader, but you also shouldn't make it utterly bland.
 
You need to avoid both extremes when writing a personal statement. It shouldn't be so personal it is unprofessional, but at the same time it should speak to your unique experiences. Similarly, you shouldn't take any controversial stances that could antagonize the reader, but you also shouldn't make it utterly bland.
I agree. And avoid writing about religion, politics or sexual orientation. You never know the type of people reading your PS
 
Don't make it a statement. Agreed it should be a little longer than that.
Don't make it personal. Disagree. It should be personal without being too sobby, everyone has conflict on their lives but don't hold the reader's conscience hostage. Make it rational and clear that you want to become a doctor.
 
For me, the PS should explain who you are ND what motivates you for medicine. So, I disagree with the first part of your quote, but agree with the second. The PS is not for discussing the injustices of the world.

Advice I recently overheard on how to write a personal statement - "Don't make it personal. Don't try to make a statement."

Agree or disagree? Any difference for med school applicants vs. residency applicants?
 
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