Personal Statement Feedback?

[thor12]

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So I have a draft of my personal statement and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it and give me some feedback? It feels a little short and I think my ending is a little iffy but we'll see. I'll PM anyone who comments wanting to read it. Thanks!

 

[zToothinator]

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[smile matters]

I can for sure read it 🙂