Personal statement help

[Dentista08]

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Hi guys, I'm helping a friend apply to D-school. She's so busy and overwhelmed with studying for the DATs, she doesn't even want to go on here and get addicted- like all of us were/are. lol Anyway, if someone is really good with PS and has a free minute to read one and give some advice on what to fix, it would be really appreciated.
Thanks!

 

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