If anyone wants to help others by sending me your personal statement I will post it on my website for all to enjoy. You can obviously remain anonymous, you can take out any names or personal information and include # interviews and acceptances and if you wish the school you are attending. I already have a small collection of previous essays. You guys can check it out at AADSAS Personal statement
I used to read essays but life is too busy in dental school. Hope the examples help and good luck!