bumping hopefully someone is willing to help edit/review my PS.
I wanted people's opinions as well if I'm discussing relevant things. So far, an outline of my PS looks like this:
Paragraph 1:
About my life in the Philippines. Talked about my low socioeconomic status when I was growing up and having to see shamans/traditional healers. I was thinking that this could set me apart as having some cultural diversity/unique life experience.
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I talked about how my younger years affected my curiosity and desire for helping others.
Paragraph 3:
I immigrated to USA at 20 years old and had some difficulties at first. But then I joined the Navy (reserves) as a field medic/corpsman, went back to school and found success at different aspects of my life.
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I haven't written it yet but maybe just a summary of how my life has shaped me to be a good potential doctor.
If you're willing to help me edit my actual PS please let me know. I'll send you a copy. I really need someone to help with the flow/grammar as well as to tell me if what I'm talking about is actually relevant. Thanks!
