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[Apparition]

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Would anyone be willing to take a look at my PS? I am trying to submit my aacomas today. I don't need any structural/grammar input, just to know whether it's good enought to send. Thanks to anyone who can help!

 

[gogo110182]

i read it...........

 

[mj1878]

Would anyone be willing to take a look at my PS? I am trying to submit my aacomas today. I don't need any structural/grammar input, just to know whether it's good enought to send. Thanks to anyone who can help!

Send it my way!

 

[mj1878]

Would anyone be willing to take a look at my PS? I am trying to submit my aacomas today. I don't need any structural/grammar input, just to know whether it's good enought to send. Thanks to anyone who can help!

Apparition:

I read it a few days ago and have been trying to PM you but every time I try, Explorer locks up and exits. Argh.

Anyway, I thought it was well-written, but you might want to think about what school will actually be asking you to write about in the essay section of their secondaries. Most want to know:

1)Why do you feel that ***COM can provide you with the education you are seeking?
2)What characteristics do you bring to ***COM?
3)Why are you seeking a career in Osteopathy?

Since you're applying to both DO and MD, you might want to consider what your motivations are for applying DO, and include that. Definitely include more Osteopathy and your personal experiences with healthcare, especially DO

PM me if you have any more questions