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SDN'ers willing to read PS's for the class of 2009
- Thread starter Mr. Rosewater
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
Emeri Onwunwa - Accepted 2004 applicant to several schools. I am taking a much needed year off and working. I know where I'm going for medical school and I have time to correct papers. Please check your paper first and spell check before PMing it to me! URM.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
Emeri Onwunwa - Accepted 2004 applicant to several schools. I am taking a much needed year off and working. I know where I'm going for medical school and I have time to correct papers. Please check your paper first and spell check before PMing it to me! URM.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
Emeri Onwunwa - Accepted 2004 applicant to several schools. I am taking a much needed year off and working. I know where I'm going for medical school and I have time to correct papers. Please check your paper first and spell check before PMing it to me! URM.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
Emeri Onwunwa - Accepted 2004 applicant to several schools. I am taking a much needed year off and working. I know where I'm going for medical school and I have time to correct papers. Please check your paper first and spell check before PMing it to me! URM.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
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Sorry folks, no more PS reading until Aug 1. I'll add myself back on then. Good luck everyone! 🙂
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Removing myself from the list... I'll be moving down to LA and won't have a computer until August! Good luck everyone!
2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. PM plz.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.[/QUOTE]
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - accepted '03. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.[/QUOTE]
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - only til 8/23. Pitt MS2. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! Also accepting Pitt secondary essays. Good luck 🙂
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - only til 8/23. Pitt MS2. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! Also accepting Pitt secondary essays. Good luck 🙂
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
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2112_rush - accepted applicant; I'm done with undergrad coursework and waiting for med school, so right now I have plenty of time.
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - only til 8/23. Pitt MS2. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! Also accepting Pitt secondary essays. Good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
YML- Bring it on
Anka - Accepted '04. Lit major. Another life experience type. PM me.
Blade28 - currently a third-year med student. PM or email your PS to me, I'll try my best to reply within 3-4 days with comments.
chapinsita- accepted (04) to several schools- I?m hispanic, so if you wrote about something related then feel free to try me as I probably understand where you?re coming from, PM me your statement and give me a week.
cphilip - accepted '04 applicant...a little nontraditional in that I took a year off to teach at an innercity high school...pm with the personal statment and I'll try my best to get back with you in a week with comments (I'll be available till the middle of June).
CrazyCarl - accepted '04. Also previously successful with research/internship/fellowship applications. Maybe one week to reply. PM me and include an email address if you don't mind.
dhoonlee - pm me your essay, will comment on structure, readability, tone and general impressions
Disenchanted 1 - Accepted '04 applicant. Bio major. PM me and I will try and get back with you as soon as possible. If I dont have any tests or anything else, I will get it back to you within 2-3 days
docchick - accepted '04 applicant, bio major, used to work as a writing tutor in undergrad...pm me.
DoctorCynical - Dr. C to the rescue.
DrJ2B - PM me your PS, will reply within a few days, would love to help in any way I can, internship apps and personal statements
drlexygoat - accepted 2004 applicant to several schools, willing to read and critique with several days lag.
essbe - PM it to me (1-wk turnaround)
exmike - Accepted 2004, low GPA, MPH (try me if you are explaining poor grades or working in your MPH)
getcloned - accepted applicant '04. did not get accepted in '03 and learned much in the interim. i work with a former pre-med adiviser from umich and he provided some insight into the ps and other aspects of the process. feel free to pm me if y'all would like some help or anything
IndyZX - applying in the 2005 cycle... PM your statement and ill send back my overall thoughts. it will not be long and detailed, but ill tell you what my gut feeling is.
IrishOarsman - accepted '04, phil major, email [email protected] but PM me to let me know when you've sent it
jlee9531 - accepted 04, low gpa, life experience type character. email with document if you can. i take a while with PSs. Comments will be given. Use me at your own risk.
medworm - I'd be happy to read PS. Though I am early in the premed process, I am an avid reader and an even more avid critic!
microTAS - MSTP applicant for 2005. ChemE. Email to [email protected] and give a week.
newquagmire - got help from SDNers when i wrote mine, so i'm returning the favor. mstp applicant. assumes you will proofread draft first. PM me for email address.
Ocean11 - accepted 2004 applicant; definetly willing to read and help critique personal statements or internship applications, PM ME
oldman - 3rd Year Med Student. I have been reading essays since spring of 2002 for my fellow SDNers. I have been an EMT, phlebotomist, rehab technician. During undergrad I was a member of Alpha Phi Omega, majored in biomedical engineering. I applied to 27 med schools, 10 interview offers, 4 acceptances. Currently at my home state school. ** I just started my clinical rotations, happy to read essays, please give me an email address to email my word edits to. It may take some time for me to read your essays. I do a bunch at once when I have free time.
Paws - I'm willing to read essays. Lots of people read my essay before I submitted it and so I am happy to read other people's this time around. I have a pretty decent English/Liberal arts background and have tutored writing in graduate school.
Peterock - PM and give a week.
Please! - Accepted '04. PM me and I'll get back to you. I didn't have the best GPA/MCAT but my interviewers told me they liked my PS...I think that having everyone and their Mama read my statement helped me out a lot.
Quideam - Pm, give a week.
somekevinguy - accepted 04 applicant...most likely heading to hms in the fall, check out the profile if you want ("The process" link below), include your email so i can get back to you. thanks
SonGoku - accepted '04, non-trad student, non-URM, female, critiqued PS's last year and this year, please send PM. Thanks and good luck.
soonerpillow - Accepted '04. I critiqued PS's last year, too, so my red pen is ready to go. Oh, and I have no life experience: I was a D.A.D.S. applicant. PM it.
sunflower79 - only til 8/23. Pitt MS2. Been editing a couple years now. Search my posts for PS advice if you wanna know what I look for. If you're still game, send it via PM with line breaks between paragraphs. I'll send it back in a day or two, I hope. Please, content edits ONLY, so don't look to me for grammar proofreading! Also accepting Pitt secondary essays. Good luck
Supadupafly - Non Trad, URM. Accepted at several schools. PM me.
Tech04 - Accepted 2004 applicant; can read until Mid August. One-week turnaround. Bit of an analytic philosophy nut, so I read for clarity and technical stuff, as well as style and content.
trojan2004 - PM me. I will be glad to help out.
velocypedalist- PM me. Accepted '04. Nothing better to do, people helped me edit my PS, time to give back. Info: High mcat, high gpa, lots of research, little to no volunteering/clinical experience. sports related ec's.
willow212 - MS-4, non-traditional (few years business experience before med school, engineering major). PM me your statement and I will try to turn around in a few days. Will be available for the next couple weeks until early May 2004.
wiscofan14 - accepted '04, 4 year scholarship D-1 athlete, wililng to read for athletes applying to med school, pm me.
Xega - Accepted '04. Also have written a few successful research grants. PM me and include an email address and I will get it back to you within a couple of days.
Yogi Bear - Accepted '03. PM me if need any help.
ZekeMD -PM your PS to me and I'll try to get it back to you with comments in a day or two.
YML- Bring it on
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is it almost time for another season of apps again?
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yup..bump
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I will read your PS and will give a prompt response too
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Ready to read personal statements. I'll return them to you with comments in 3 days or less.
Fair warning - I don't like reading multiple drafts of the same essay. Once I provide my comments, you are welcome to ask for clarification on anything that doesn't makes sense or send me excerpts of revised material from my comments (not the whole thing, please.)
Fair warning - I don't like reading multiple drafts of the same essay. Once I provide my comments, you are welcome to ask for clarification on anything that doesn't makes sense or send me excerpts of revised material from my comments (not the whole thing, please.)
