In regards to specific wording, I was thinking something like this:
As an American Jew and the grandson of Israelis, I have always felt a strong connection to, and a passion for, the state of Israel. Throughout my life I have been inspired by its people, culture, history, music, and language. I have been a member of many organizations and programs that have allowed me to engage with others who share my passion, including one that provides student exchange opportunities between American and Israeli teenagers. My most meaningful experience in Israel was when I took part in Gadna, an Israeli military simulation program where I was side by side with Israeli teenagers preparing for their military service. My commander, who had been a combat medic, constantly admonished me on the value of human life, an important lesson for any future physician. Above all, I learned how cooperation in the face of adversity is essential to success in a common goal, a frequent mantra in medicine. During the upcoming year, I plan to volunteer in Israel as an EMS ambulance first responder through the Magen David Adom Overseas Volunteer Program. My reasons for doing so are two-fold: I wish to gain hands on exposure to emergency medicine, and I want to give back to Israel in a meaningful way. The opportunity to work with Israelis on the forefront of medical emergencies and have a positive impact on many lives will be one that will undoubtedly be extremely rewarding and serve me in my intended career as a physician.
