supplemental question

[pharmRxn]

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after answering this supplemental question below, i feel unsure about my answer. my answer has to do with something that will take me at least 20 years to accomplish after i graduate from pharmacy school. so, my essay focused on an innovative idea. here is the question..

The vision of Pacific University School of Pharmacy is to graduate pharmaceutical care providers who have the knowledge and skills to be agents of change and advance innovative approaches to improving public health and care to diverse populations in their communities. In your own words, please describe how, as a pharmacist, you are going to support Pacific's vision and advance of the field of pharmacy. Please be as specific as possible.

 

[IWantTheGenetic]

i hope u had someone fix your essay's grammar..

 

[pharmRxn]

i hope u had someone fix your essay's grammar..

i wrote the question in a hurry and i didn't pay attention to the grammar.
i am concerned about my answer to the question. i focused on one innovative idea, but i don't know why this pharmacy school expect us to change something about the pharmacy profession. English is not my first language so any help would be appreciated.