Thats a ****in lie bitch you know im from the gudda

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Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
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I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.
 
Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.

I have no idea what this is supposed to be, but thanks for boosting the confidence I have in my own writing skills.
 
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Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.

Congrats!
 
Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.

OP graduated from this program?

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jo4g2aKscaQ[/YOUTUBE]
 
Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.


I think my verbal score just went down...
 
So you're saying DO is better than Carib MD?
 
OP what's your goal here? You havnt posted in like 1.5years - where you been? Did you finally get into Brown? You ah, still goin the cardiology route or was the money satisfactory in rads? You ah, still workin' on that novel?.....

How you uh, how you comin' on that novel you're working on? Huh? Gotta a big, uh, big stack of papers there? Gotta, gotta nice litte story you're working on there? Your big novel you've been working on for 3 years? Huh? Gotta, gotta compelling protaganist? Yeah? Gotta obstacle for him to overcome? Huh? Gotta story brewing there? Working on, working on that for quite some time? Huh? (voice getting higher pitched) Yea, talking about that 3 years ago. Been working on that the whole time? Nice little narrative? Beginning, middle, and end? Some friends become enemies, some enemies become friends? At the end your main character is richer from the experience? Yeah? Yeah? (voice returns to normal) No, no, you deserve some time off
 
Are the bots writing personal statements now? 😕
 
Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.

Da fuq is this?
 
There is no way this guy got a 37 on the MCAT. The best you can do with a 0 on verbal is 30.
 
The grammar Nazi in me just had a seizure.
 
Kenneth Ramirez
18 May 2013
Essay Title


I would like to be accepted into your school to study Sociology using the resources provided from your university. I am currently enrolled at the Community College of Rhode Island with a GPA average of (insert 3.0 or above GPA). With the help from a Community College of Rhode Island and Brown University advisor Andrew Cook and my fellow peers at the Connect to College program I was able to obtain much research through volunteering and public speaking. While starting the Physical Science Club I have learned how much fellow sociologist need my insight through courageous steps I have taken. I truly believe that the liberal steps that I have taken with my studies and my work have greatly improved many of the viewpoints of citizens in the state as well as internationally. With help from Brown University I would like to enroll into the next Rhode Island State Trooper academy to continue my research as well as earn a degree in Sociology. My father Genaro Ramirez a recently retired Rhode Island State Trooper is helping me improve be a police officer by taking steps needed for police work through nutrient suggestions and daily workout routines. Hopefully by next years time I will be ready to participate in the following academy and studying full-time with your university. My current studies include helping the younger generation find their place in the study of Physical Science with the creation of the Community College of Rhode Island Physical Science Club. But with the career plans I have chosen I would like to guide older generations of students seek their place in the study of society. After graduating the your universities Sociology Program I want to help students and other people interested in their communities well being deal with their problems in sociologically opening doors and create new ways for others to move forward in their daily lives. The approach I take towards the research of gun violence and the new laws being created other social problems will charge our development towards a better more functional society. The prospective future I am seeking with your school assures Brown University at least one article including the surrounding Rhode Island society as well as improving future views and opinions on theory already instilled by other sociologist of the past. Brown alumni take part in my studies and the all the past students and faculty who I have worked with find all of my research and past work to be up to par and support my actions towards fully involving myself with the university. If given the chance, my change in pace towards the study of society will make tremendous methods towards the study. The moves made in recent sociological discovers although published need more social verstehen in my opinion and I would like to do my part towards helping expand the perspectives given in the field of research today.

The title raps, the passage don't. 😴 This is an honest critique, assuming that's what you wanted.
 
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