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PerpetualBurn said:As much as I'm trying, I cannot be harsh to you. Your story, even if it isn't specific, is touching and shows a very real emotional drive to succeed. It has flashes of a very good personal statement....This thing is completely within your reach.
piranha11 said:After a horrendous 4 year college experience- of which i was kicked out of after 3 yrs, i've finally found what i want to do. Med school.
*fyi: transfer GPA was affected by my first 2 years by lack of motivation and then my 3rd year of bad health and depression.
I was kicked out of school at the end of spring semester 2005. In the previous year, I have spent my time away from school and away from classes in general to regain my strength, and confidence to step foot into education again. I have done some traveling to explore my options, and rationalize everything that was put forward for me. My visit to India was a dramatic eye opener. Upon staying there for 2.5-3 months, I realized there are so many factors that depend on education. Quality of life can improve with the basic standards of education. In such a place, any small quantity of education can improve the basic lifestyle. Sometimes some things have to be drawn out in such an extreme way to see the value of an object, and in my situation, the value of education had such a great impact. That is what I have realized: education is a step-by-step process to reach your goals. Without it, dreams are not attainable and remain as dreams. I know to you it may be a schpiel, but after hitting rock bottom- you understand the value of things that are no longer in your grasp.
After coming back from my trip, i joined a local state school and took 3 classes. I succeeded in getting As, however, im still a non-admitted student right now. No matter how hard I try, it will take me atleast 2.5 years to finish up my undergrad. And my chances of caribbean is by far better than my chances in the US.
I have 3 choices (in order of preference)
1. ask my old school (the one that i was kicked out from) to reinstate me..a 2nd chance to rectify the past- for peace of mind. and re-think my aim towards medicine (ie look into law)
2. continue at the state school and opt for caribbean after 2 years- while for the next 2 semester, i take 8 credits *2 classes w/ labs* along with classes from Community College to gain admission into state univ. (i've talked to the admissions of the state- and this is the only way i can gain acceptance: take 8 credits at their school and then take whatever i want at comm. college)
3. I recently found this: Twinning program of AUA and Manipal. This is where you do 2 years of all your pre-medical requirements and then 2 years of medicine followed by your clinical rotations in NYC. This program starts in Jan 2007 and equally same length as whatever I will be doing in the US. The greatest option for this program is that you can do all pre-med(2 yrs) and basic med sciences(2yrs) at AUA (american univ of antigua) and then clinicals at NYC (AUA is accredited by NY hospitals). Are there people in this program or know of this program well enough to advise?
I know this is a long post, but you're advice/suggestions/feedback, though it will be harsh- is very much appreciated.
After a horrendous 4 year college experience- of which i was kicked out of after 3 yrs, i've finally found what i want to do. Med school.
*fyi: transfer GPA was affected by my first 2 years by lack of motivation and then my 3rd year of bad health and depression.
I was kicked out of school at the end of spring semester 2005. In the previous year, I have spent my time away from school and away from classes in general to regain my strength, and confidence to step foot into education again. I have done some traveling to explore my options, and rationalize everything that was put forward for me. My visit to India was a dramatic eye opener. Upon staying there for 2.5-3 months, I realized there are so many factors that depend on education. Quality of life can improve with the basic standards of education. In such a place, any small quantity of education can improve the basic lifestyle. Sometimes some things have to be drawn out in such an extreme way to see the value of an object, and in my situation, the value of education had such a great impact. That is what I have realized: education is a step-by-step process to reach your goals. Without it, dreams are not attainable and remain as dreams. I know to you it may be a schpiel, but after hitting rock bottom- you understand the value of things that are no longer in your grasp.
After coming back from my trip, i joined a local state school and took 3 classes. I succeeded in getting As, however, im still a non-admitted student right now. No matter how hard I try, it will take me atleast 2.5 years to finish up my undergrad. And my chances of caribbean is by far better than my chances in the US.
I have 3 choices (in order of preference)
1. ask my old school (the one that i was kicked out from) to reinstate me..a 2nd chance to rectify the past- for peace of mind. and re-think my aim towards medicine (ie look into law)
2. continue at the state school and opt for caribbean after 2 years- while for the next 2 semester, i take 8 credits *2 classes w/ labs* along with classes from Community College to gain admission into state univ. (i've talked to the admissions of the state- and this is the only way i can gain acceptance: take 8 credits at their school and then take whatever i want at comm. college)
3. I recently found this: Twinning program of AUA and Manipal. This is where you do 2 years of all your pre-medical requirements and then 2 years of medicine followed by your clinical rotations in NYC. This program starts in Jan 2007 and equally same length as whatever I will be doing in the US. The greatest option for this program is that you can do all pre-med(2 yrs) and basic med sciences(2yrs) at AUA (american univ of antigua) and then clinicals at NYC (AUA is accredited by NY hospitals). Are there people in this program or know of this program well enough to advise?
I know this is a long post, but you're advice/suggestions/feedback, though it will be harsh- is very much appreciated.
You wasted your parent's time and hard earned money - who were only trying to give you the best education they could afford. You might as well find another career option...you don't have the talent to hack it as a physician if you had to be kicked out of school.
...and his first 2 years of failing were due to "lack of motivation"- not really the greatest excuse so I would recommend not putting that into a personal statement.
Well it is definitely an excuse, but i think what iheartrain is stating is that it's an excuse that really doesn't look good. For all ADCOMs know, piranha just could have been very lazy, and put some dramatic spin on it to make it look more of a disadvatange than it actually was. "Lack of motivation" is somewhat associated with "laziness" so it tends to look a little bad.How is that not a valid excuse?
How is that not a valid excuse?
Students that do well in college do well because they are motivated. There is a "something" driving them to study and work harder than others, may it be money, parents, simple pleasure for learning, wanting to graduate, etc.
Students that don't do well are not motivated...there can be many reasons for this "lack of motivation": immaturity, health/mental problems (everyone experiences these differently, so you can't say "well, other people get sick and still do well"...everyone is different emotionally).
Don't be so quick to judge. Not everyone starts off on the right foot.
I would also recommend completing 4 years of college with a good overall and scienc gpa (I'd say a +3.5 if possible, to really offset the first 3 years) doing well on the MCAT. Just go at your own pace, don't overload yourself with too many classes at once, and finish all your pre-reqs and some extras if possible, some advanced classes like Biochem, high level physiology classes with an A in front will make you feel more confident. Good luck. 👍
Life is a lot like golf. Sometimes you can spend 6 strokes making up for 1 really bad one 😀
By the way, I'm not sure why something terrible has to happen to you to make up for past mistakes. Why does someone have to have a dead family member or something? When I started college I was a kid. Kids make mistakes. Not everyone was raised to be a doctor. Not everyone finished highschool with post-graduate plans in their heads. Most of all, not everybody can live an entire life without ever questioning any alternatives to a path they had decided on at a young age. To assume that all people, or at least all future doctors, should make perfect decisions shows a fundamental missunderstanding of psychological development, and exposes the naivete you have used to manifest and nurture the image of "doctor" as infallible and unhuman. I think it is highly reflective of someone's dedication and will to dig themselves out of an academic ditch. This in many ways shows a lot more guts and character than someone who has blindly followed a cookie-cutter path and is unable to imagine what it would be like to "lack motivation". I would hope any mature adcomm will realize that. I don't think there is any reason for them to be particularly vendictive...at least not as much as your average SDN-er.
I have a true interest in medicine, and i also have an interest in law(seeing how there's an impact of world politics right now). However my interest in medicine comes more naturally because i like to help people. That's what i did as well in india. I volunteered at the hospitals/clinics near the surrounding villages to get an idea if this what i like. And i do like it.
So could you technically help people via social work? Definitely address this. It is nice to see that you had this life changing experience, but in a way, I would ask you this: Where was this drive to help people in the first few years of your college education? Does it take a trip to India to make you realize that there are these hardships that require attention?piranha11 said:Upon staying there for 2.5-3 months, I realized there are so many factors that depend on education. Quality of life can improve with the basic standards of education. In such a place, any small quantity of education can improve the basic lifestyle. Sometimes some things have to be drawn out in such an extreme way to see the value of an object, and in my situation, the value of education had such a great impact. That is what I have realized: education is a step-by-step process to reach your goals. Without it, dreams are not attainable and remain as dreams.
After a horrendous 4 year college experience- of which i was kicked out of after 3 yrs, i've finally found what i want to do. Med school.
*fyi: transfer GPA was affected by my first 2 years by lack of motivation and then my 3rd year of bad health and depression.
I was kicked out of school at the end of spring semester 2005. In the previous year, I have spent my time away from school and away from classes in general to regain my strength, and confidence to step foot into education again. I have done some traveling to explore my options, and rationalize everything that was put forward for me. My visit to India was a dramatic eye opener. Upon staying there for 2.5-3 months, I realized there are so many factors that depend on education. Quality of life can improve with the basic standards of education. In such a place, any small quantity of education can improve the basic lifestyle. Sometimes some things have to be drawn out in such an extreme way to see the value of an object, and in my situation, the value of education had such a great impact. That is what I have realized: education is a step-by-step process to reach your goals. Without it, dreams are not attainable and remain as dreams. I know to you it may be a schpiel, but after hitting rock bottom- you understand the value of things that are no longer in your grasp.
After coming back from my trip, i joined a local state school and took 3 classes. I succeeded in getting As, however, im still a non-admitted student right now. No matter how hard I try, it will take me atleast 2.5 years to finish up my undergrad. And my chances of caribbean is by far better than my chances in the US.
I have 3 choices (in order of preference)
1. ask my old school (the one that i was kicked out from) to reinstate me..a 2nd chance to rectify the past- for peace of mind. and re-think my aim towards medicine (ie look into law)
2. continue at the state school and opt for caribbean after 2 years- while for the next 2 semester, i take 8 credits *2 classes w/ labs* along with classes from Community College to gain admission into state univ. (i've talked to the admissions of the state- and this is the only way i can gain acceptance: take 8 credits at their school and then take whatever i want at comm. college)
3. I recently found this: Twinning program of AUA and Manipal. This is where you do 2 years of all your pre-medical requirements and then 2 years of medicine followed by your clinical rotations in NYC. This program starts in Jan 2007 and equally same length as whatever I will be doing in the US. The greatest option for this program is that you can do all pre-med(2 yrs) and basic med sciences(2yrs) at AUA (american univ of antigua) and then clinicals at NYC (AUA is accredited by NY hospitals). Are there people in this program or know of this program well enough to advise?
I know this is a long post, but you're advice/suggestions/feedback, though it will be harsh- is very much appreciated.
OP said:1. ask my old school (the one that i was kicked out from) to reinstate me..a 2nd chance to rectify the past- for peace of mind. and re-think my aim towards medicine (ie look into law)