URGENT. Late, but personal statement reader needed.

[SummerWillow]

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Is there anyone who could give my personal statement draft a look? It's a bit long, and I'm struggling with what to cut out. So a third-person's opinion would be highly appreciated.
As soon as this is done, I'll be able to submit my primary. Which is already a month late.

Thanks in advance...

 

[GomerPyle]

Paste it into a message and send it to me - I'll give you some general advice.

 

[siffster]

Hi SDN, I was wondering if someone could look over my essay as well. I don't know anyone who is in medical school or undergoing the application process, so I'm pretty much on my own. any advice would be appreciated.

Please PM me if you are willing to look over my statement. I will leave this thread for the OP. Sorry for hijacking your thread like this

 

[residentyear9]

Feel free to PM me...24-48 hours turnaround. busy at work!

 

[SummerWillow]

Thank you both! I knew I needed a third party's opinion.
Anyone else?