Using "!" on secondaries?

[The Deep]

Currently writing a secondary about community health and I was discussing how I was surprised to find out about something. I threw that comment in parentheses and ended it with an exclamation point. I understand it can come off as immature/unprofessional, but because this is an optional secondary, I wanted to write something more personal and slightly less robotic. Any opinions?

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[wysdoc]

Currently writing a secondary about community health and I was discussing how I was surprised to find out about something. I threw that comment in parentheses and ended it with an exclamation point. I understand it can come off as immature/unprofessional, but because this is an optional secondary, I wanted to write something more personal and slightly less robotic. Any opinions?

Use sparingly & it will be ok

 

[Mr.Smile12]

Don't go overboard with ALL CAPS too.

 

[The Deep]

Don't go overboard with ALL CAPS too.

I can't even imagine a case where someone would write like that. Quoting someone yelling?

 

[Dr. Fiddlesticks]

"I don't use my exclamation points as haphazardly as you do"