Well, not going to post it, lol.. I might still have to use it again.
But essentially I addressed the question of choice, consequences and responsibility in a way the Matrix trilogy WISHED they could've 🙂
I had to somehow address my lack of performance in my earlier years with my now burning drive to practice medicine and the only way I could do that without blatantly writing, "mea culpa" all over my paper was to address it as an evolutionary process of understanding the choices we make, and whether we have the grit to carry it out.
Of course I also included anecdotal examples, such as me going to ER numerous times during finals week because two of my friends met with unfortunate circumstances, and described that as choice.
(I believe one of my LORs also addresses the same exact point)