"Why I want to be a doctor" Help?

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Hi everyone.

I really want to be a doctor, but answering why I want to be a doctor has always been challenging. My pre-health committee seemed very confused when I told them why I want to be a doctor and I cannot understand where the problem lies. Here is a quick statement as to why I want to be a doctor:

I want to be a doctor because it allows me to continue studying the science behind the human body (the biochemistry, the biology, the physiology, etc) while also being able to use my talents and knowledge to serve and care patients. My previous work experiences helped me learn that I have a strong empathy and sympathy towards the people I have served and I know this trait will help benefit me in the medical field.

Now, I say this because:
1) I love molecular science and physiology. I think it is incredible fascinating. Learning these subjects has legitimately changed my life (I workout more often, I eat healthier, I do my best to get good sleep) when in the past I was very ignorant towards my health.
a) I must mention that the first question I get when I say this is "Why don't you want to go into research?" Well, this is something I need to work on. I'll put it like this since I'm only typing to a forum: Doing research (as a profession) isn't satisfying for me because it's too "cold." I have done research in the past and the experience was invaluable for understanding what I want to do with my life and will help me during and after medical school. I understand doctors do research as well during fellowships or even after, and I am willing to do that. But doing solely research as a profession? I do not like the idea of being in a lab for most of my days being somewhat kept away from the world. In fact, I'm doing research with the Cleveland Clinic (not clinical research) right now and I just can't see myself doing this for a living. With being a doctor, I would get to experience more genuine human interaction with patients and experience diversity instead of the same group of people every day. That is why I do not want to do into research.

2) So my past work experience has been as a lifeguard and lifeguard supervisor at a very demanding local waterpark (that unfortunately was shut down last year) and as a pharmacy technician at a very busy CVS right next door to a hospital (a lot of prescriptions coming in and patients waiting after an appointment or surgery). I've also volunteered at a local children's hospital where I interacted with pediatric patients while they were in the hospital and done a fair share of shadowing (both D.O. and M.D.). Without going into too much detail, my experiences helped me developed my skill in taking care of people. I have learned how to handle frustrated people and to help assure them that their health and safety are my top priority. In both the waterpark and CVS, we get customer surveys where past guests/patients evaluate our service towards them and I repeatedly scored high in care and satisfaction and have received comments from these guests/patients stating that I sincere and genuine in my service. If I could show these results, I would.

So, any critiques on my reasoning would be greatly appreciated. I am sending my application out soon so any help will be taken seriously.
 
Hello. It is pretty clear but I do think that perhaps it reads a little dry and formulaic. Also I would put the help others above the like science. Honestly your explanations in nonbold seem more readable and relatable. So I think your message is very clear but maybe the delivery just needs to be softened a bit.


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Why don't you mesh your bolded sentences in something of the like:

Medicine provides the best of both worlds as it integrates my empathetic nature with my love of research and puts it into practice...something like that. This then partially addresses point #1 and 2, where youre stating you like research enough to continue with it, but youll be taking it 1 step further by putting that knowledge to practice. You also hit on your personality by implying that you get to help others more directly. Unlike research, where it impacts people indirectly.
 
My only caution would be that describing yourself as empathetic may be construed as a bit presumptuous. I think perhaps... my concern for others would be more humble and credible. Just a thought


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While your reasons don't have to be wholly novel and unique, do you think there are med school applicants who aren't interested in the human body and want to care for patients? Not trying to be a dick, but those are less reasons and more expectations of physicians.

Try this. Look back on the last 4 years of school. Look back through all the grid - the late nights, boring lectures, etc - and then look at the other experiences you had. What of those experiences kept you going? What people or events reaffirmed your your commitment; kept you from burning out?
 
Thank you all for the feedback, I will certainly take into account your suggestions.
 
You are telling a story with your application. What do your EC hours reflect? Use that to construct a narrative.
 
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