Would like your opinion on this short application essay!

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TheEugenius

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I'm a first year university student (hopeful pre-med) in a life science program, and I'm trying to transfer into a health science one, which I was initially rejected from because of an application essay that did not suffice in some way.

To avoid that mistake, I'm looking for opinions and critiques of my short essay (which has a 1500 characters maximum limit) that is required to be written again for transfer. It'd be awesome if you could look it over and give honest feedback!

Reply if you're interested, and I'll PM you the essay.
 
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