I am planning on writing update letters to a few schools (GWU, Louisville, NYMC, maybe Rush). Anyway, I was wondering if I can get some feedback on what to say.
I was planning on opening up by reiterating my interest in each school. Then explaining how I have continued to research and volunteer in the hospital. Next I was going to talk about one community service project I did for Relay for Life. Then I was going to explain that I shadowed two physicians (Internal Med and Gen Surgery). For this, should I explain what I saw/gained from the experience? Also, it was only about 10 hours total, should I mention this (I have no prior shadowing, but lots of med volunteer work) or should I say "2 days of shadowing". Lastly, should I mention the names of the physicians?
Then I was going to wrap up by mentioning my 4.0 this semester.
Any thoughts would be great. Is there anything I should add or take out?
Thanks
I was planning on opening up by reiterating my interest in each school. Then explaining how I have continued to research and volunteer in the hospital. Next I was going to talk about one community service project I did for Relay for Life. Then I was going to explain that I shadowed two physicians (Internal Med and Gen Surgery). For this, should I explain what I saw/gained from the experience? Also, it was only about 10 hours total, should I mention this (I have no prior shadowing, but lots of med volunteer work) or should I say "2 days of shadowing". Lastly, should I mention the names of the physicians?
Then I was going to wrap up by mentioning my 4.0 this semester.
Any thoughts would be great. Is there anything I should add or take out?
Thanks