You're a success, will you read my personal statement?

[artist1980]

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removed it based on some suggestions from others. if you'd still like to review it, you can PM me.

 

[Ninety]

it is a good statement, but i have some points to mention about:
1- "It tugged at my heartstrings to imagine being unable to chew after struggling to find food" should be modified since "my heartstrings" looks exaggerated

2- you did mention why you like dentistry, but you need to explain more in details what happens exactly in your Neuro test and convincing reasons to withdraw from medical school

wish you all the best!

 

[GiTsticker]

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