Can someone pls proofread my re-app essay?

[smiledoc1]

Hey guys,
I would really appreciate if someone could proofread my re-app essay and provide some feedback.
Thanks in advance!

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[AppalachianDentalBoy]

Wait have you not applied yet? It is too late in the cycle...

 

[artist2022]

Official Pre-Dental Personal Statement Reader List 2019-2020

But I agree w/ @AppalachianDentalBoy

 

[smiledoc1]

Wait have you not applied yet? It is too late in the cycle...

I will likely apply next cycle and add more to this essay, but I want some input on how it looks so far, and maybe get some direction on things to include/exclude. So far, I sent it to one sdn-er that was willing to read it over, but they unfortunately provided only a few words of negative feedback and discouragement, no advice on how to improve. So I would appreciate someone else's opinion!

 

[smiledoc1]

I will likely apply next cycle and add more to this essay, but I want some input on how it looks so far, and maybe get some direction on things to include/exclude. So far, I sent it to one sdn-er that was willing to read it over, but they unfortunately provided only a few words of negative feedback and discouragement, no advice on how to improve. So I would appreciate someone else's opinion!

Also, I am confident in my stats, so I think I still have a shot this cycle, but I think I will take peoples advice and apply early in June.

 

[deleted945327]

I will likely apply next cycle and add more to this essay, but I want some input on how it looks so far, and maybe get some direction on things to include/exclude. So far, I sent it to one sdn-er that was willing to read it over, but they unfortunately provided only a few words of negative feedback and discouragement, no advice on how to improve. So I would appreciate someone else's opinion!

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[smiledoc1]

Welcome to SDN!

I don't feel very welcome..oh, the irony