General Admissions & OTCAS Is there anyone available to give me some feedback on my personal statement?

[Caliweather]

Hi,
I'm applying this year and I was stuck with writing my personal statement. This is my first time ever writing a serious personal statement. I'm not very confident with how I have presented myself, so would really appreciate someone could give me some feedback on my PS.

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[FutureOT2018x]

sure!

 

[thebiggestsky]

I would be willing to read it as well. Let me know!