Hi guys, firstly I like to thank all those SDN users who have helped me with my PS the past month or so!
I have reworked it according to your advice and have gotten a few interview invites to a broad range of schools. Now, I like to hear some honest feedback on the final draft of my PS (for those who haven't had the chance) to prepare me for my interviews in the next couple of weeks.
Any comments are welcome, ie, you could just let me know how you 'feel' after reading it. But if you spot any gaps in my PS I should address as well, it'll be awesome too.
Drop me a PM if you can help take a look at my submitted PS, thanks!!