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Shroomhead, see the first post, just PM any of us and we'll help you
Hi, Can I send you my personal statement?i got in with a 2.99 prepharm GPA. and i know my personal statement kicked ass. it was inspiring, even by my standards if you need help, just message me.
sureHi, Can I send you my personal statement?
hi there, are you still willig to read personal statements?
Hi there sorry for the late reply, I didn't get a chance to visit this forum the past few days. Yes, I am still interest in reading your personal statement. However for quick reply please PM me. Good luck
Likewise - this is not a place to ask for someone to send you a PS. You should write your own - and then have it proofread.
Shroomhead, see the first post, just PM any of us and we'll help you
How do we PM you guys ??? Sorry I'm new to this forum
the admissions committee doesnt skim it. or i would like to think they wouldnt. this isnt admission to undergrad or an AP essay, this is a professional school essay... they have much less of these to read and know how much it means to people. if you want, send it to any of us listed and we can tell you if its too much. i dont see how it can be TOO personal though, unless you add negative feelings to it (ie, My dad wants me to be a pharmacist... i hate him...dammit, dad...)Hi, First, I would like to thank you so much for your support, even though thank you is not enough ~^^
Secondly, I need some advices for my personal statement
I gave my personal statement to one of my friend, and after she read it, she said it is a strong personal statement
then I gave my personal statement to the tutor in English tutor center. After "skimming" my personal statement; he said it is too personal and has a lot of irrelevant detail that I should take out. He said my personal statement should have the attention right from the beginning,should have the thesis right from the beginning, not at the end of the essay because no one will have time to read the whole personal statement and find the main purpose at the end . He said there are a lot of application out there and the admission definitely just skim through it.
But I read the tip and the advices in this forum, all people said that your personal statement needs to be personal, needs to address who you are, and don't assume and guess what do people in the Admission want to read in the personal statement
???
Hi, First, I would like to thank you so much for your support, even though thank you is not enough ~^^
Secondly, I need some advices for my personal statement
I gave my personal statement to one of my friend, and after she read it, she said it is a strong personal statement
then I gave my personal statement to the tutor in English tutor center. After "skimming" my personal statement; he said it is too personal and has a lot of irrelevant detail that I should take out. He said my personal statement should have the attention right from the beginning,should have the thesis right from the beginning, not at the end of the essay because no one will have time to read the whole personal statement and find the main purpose at the end . He said there are a lot of application out there and the admission definitely just skim through it.
But I read the tip and the advices in this forum, all people said that your personal statement needs to be personal, needs to address who you are, and don't assume and guess what do people in the Admission want to read in the personal statement
???
silly question regarding position statementI composed it using pharmcas word document. I tried to post it in to the space provided by pharmcas website. I seem like my essay lose paragraph format by simply cut and paste? I haven't e-submitted the application yet though.
ok so i just send the PS in pm if i want someone to proofread it for me?
silly question regarding position statementI composed it using pharmcas word document. I tried to post it in to the space provided by pharmcas website. I seem like my essay lose paragraph format by simply cut and paste? I haven't e-submitted the application yet though.
Any of you guys are still writing personal statement? I'm pulling my hair out oz of this... It takes forever... I want to submit my application so bad. It's already July! Is it so important? I just want to send it.
Any of you guys are still writing personal statement? I'm pulling my hair out oz of this... It takes forever... I want to submit my application so bad. It's already July! Is it so important? I just want to send it.
ok so i just send the PS in pm if i want someone to proofread it for me?
Oooooh, I like the sound of that =D Volunteer staff sounds faaaaaancy.
I feel as if you should spell it out for the committee, but don't make it the only point of your essay. Feel free to go into general details, your vision, your motivations... but don't make the whole essay about how you would like to do research. Maybe you can add qualities of yourself that show you are suitable for the pharmacy career. I guess what I'm saying is to pitch yourself to the colleges and not just your vision.I am writing my statement and I am talking about the student research that I have done, how much should i go into it? I'm basically talking about how having a PharmD gives me an opportunity to pursue my research interests if i choose to go in that direction. I feel like I should just mention the basic idea, and leave the explaining for if I get an interview somewhere.
Hi there UtterDevotion.
I've submitted my PS to PharmCAS, but working on my other PS for the supplemental app. Would you please proofread them?
thanks
I need you help. PM youHi all! I am glad help out with personal statements. I recently just got accepted into Albany College of Pharmacy, but I am planning to transfer back to my state school, so I am also having many of the SDN members to proofread my personal statements. I applied to three schools, and got interviews on all of them. I wrote a total 6 essays for those three schools + PharmCAS
I have just put together my Pharmcas essay and i am hoping someone would help me proofread it and Maybe i could get some insights as well. Please let me know if you are chanced.
For all those students who are looking for someone to proofread their personal statement, i suggest you go to your academic advising counslers. Every school has one. Don't send your personal statement to people who just got accepted to pharmacy school. Their profile is different from yours, and just because he/she got accepted doesn't mean their personal statement was good. Seek professional advice, from people who have experience and maturity. I can garantee you most people here just want to get ideas from other personal statements by saying that they have gotten accepted to pharmacy school. Number one, they are not professionals, just yet. Number two, your personal statement is private, and you should trust people you see in person and people who have experience such as academic advising. Number three, we have all faced different circumstances that drove us into the pharmacy field, so these people will try to correct your personal statement by adding some of the things they wrote on their personal statements. Academic advising will not do that, they will help you improve what you already have. So do not be fooled by this pharmacy forum, just like aol, and other websites, they too can have phony people in it. Good luck to all.......
For all those students who are looking for someone to proofread their personal statement, i suggest you go to your academic advising counslers. Every school has one. Don't send your personal statement to people who just got accepted to pharmacy school. Their profile is different from yours, and just because he/she got accepted doesn't mean their personal statement was good. Seek professional advice, from people who have experience and maturity. I can garantee you most people here just want to get ideas from other personal statements by saying that they have gotten accepted to pharmacy school. Number one, they are not professionals, just yet. Number two, your personal statement is private, and you should trust people you see in person and people who have experience such as academic advising. Number three, we have all faced different circumstances that drove us into the pharmacy field, so these people will try to correct your personal statement by adding some of the things they wrote on their personal statements. Academic advising will not do that, they will help you improve what you already have. So do not be fooled by this pharmacy forum, just like aol, and other websites, they too can have phony people in it. Good luck to all.......
Hello.
I can proofread your essay. I have experience in writing. I have many friends who got into pharmacy schools and they shared with me their pharmacy school essays. I have about six or seven personal statements from pharmacists and friends who are either in pharmacy school now or have been accepted for this year. I think I can help some people get into pharmacy school by sharing those essays I have. I have also written an essay myself that is rather better than those sample essays combined. Please email me or PM me if you would like some help with personal statements and what they should contain.
Thanks.
can u plz pm me one of the essays thanx