Personal Statment Help

[swimmergirl96]

Super new to this forum but is there anyone here that wouldn't mind giving my personal statement a quick glance? I just would like to make sure that it flows well.

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[LunaOri]

You can PM it to me and I will be happy to take a look.

 

[swimmergirl96]

You can PM it to me and I will be happy to take a look.

Thank you! I'll send it to you now. The highlighted portion is the conclusion which I am trying to figure out how to wrap it all together.

 

[Rachapkis]

if you PM me, I will read it too.