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I'm in the process of writing student grants to help compensate for the costs of running my dissertation research and I have a question about how to word my hypotheses.
I received feedback from previous reviewers that they are not very straight forward and easy to understand (I agree but was specifically requested to write them that way by my committee members). They are also very long and take up about 1/3 of a page for 4. I could summarize them, in the process make them clearer, and thus shorten them (which is also something I'm trying to do as student grants are usually limited to very few pages and I need the space).
Do you think if I say something like "the hypotheses, in summary, are:" I'll be crossing into some kind of murky waters related ethical research issues or is it ok?
I received feedback from previous reviewers that they are not very straight forward and easy to understand (I agree but was specifically requested to write them that way by my committee members). They are also very long and take up about 1/3 of a page for 4. I could summarize them, in the process make them clearer, and thus shorten them (which is also something I'm trying to do as student grants are usually limited to very few pages and I need the space).
Do you think if I say something like "the hypotheses, in summary, are:" I'll be crossing into some kind of murky waters related ethical research issues or is it ok?